Full Lips Fuller Commentary Track Pt 1

 Hello,

So I decided to start the commentary track on this story now and break it into two parts.  Part 1 (this one obviously) will cover Chapter 1 - 5 and Part 2 Chapters 6 - 10.

The idea for the particular story came from the episode Fast Times at Bayview High.  Sienna obviously only wanted Jackson to kiss her so she could say that he wasn't what Rocki claimed he was (not knowing she started the rumor).  The girls all seemed enamored by the idea of Jackson being a good kisser (with Taylor Hatala waving in particular) and a few of the girls giggled.  Thus, the idea of my story was born.

Now, to be fair I am a die-hard Jackson/Rocki shipper.  I have told several stories where they get their happy ending (most put them through the wringer first).  I have recently expanded to some original characters and other side characters.  This is just to broaden my scope and tell stories that I want to.  In my mind, Jackson and Rocki ended up together, and will believe so until another sequel series proves me wrong.

Originally this story was only 8 chapters with each girl getting 1 chapter but more on that in a bit.  As I stated on my blog, not all of the girls on the dance team are credited.  I had to look through multiple websites and they only credit the ones I've credited.

Chapter 1: Casey - So going off the picture from the cafeteria scene, I decided to start with Casey as she was the girl closest to Jackson and Sienna in the cafeteria.  As such I selected her to be the first girl immediately after Rocki (the event happens the same day as Fast Times at Bayview High after all).  I have to admit that Casey starts out as one of my overall favorites.

However... while the character did nothing wrong (ever) based on the photos I found on the web of actress Kaycee Rice I decided to change the future of this version of Casey.

Chapter 2: Trinity - As the actress has a unique name I kept it (as was) and just changed her last name.  Trinity gets two make-out sessions to change things up a bit.  She, like Casey, starts out similar to Casey but things eventually change.

Chapter 3: Coco - So, as I stated in the Dance Team Blog Entry, I have been trying to decide on a first name for this character as Coco sounds more like a nickname than a given name.  I decided on Corissa as it isn't common and I could see Coco being spun out of it by a younger sibling.  I used Coco briefly as a partial romantic foil in my Rocki Romance story.  I haven't used her in such a way since so it was kind of fun to include her in this.

Sidenote: Part of the fun of using seldom seen/used characters is that I get to develop their personalities.  Take Coco for example.  In her sole appearance we know she is Sienna's BFF, she's afraid of Sienna turning on her and is starving because Sienna dictates her diet.  That's it.  As such I get to turn her into a less shallow and more well-rounded character in my stories.

This actually applies to pretty much all of the background characters as only Popko, and Lola are given any substance in their appearances.  I don't count Mankowski (who I don't like for the record) as he is just an idiot.

Also, other than Rocki, Max's nemesis, Rose's mother (CJ), and Lola we don't have any idea what the girls families are like so I cast Sienna as a spoiled rich girl as that is pretty much her attitude.  As such she would surround herself with similar friends.

Chapter 4: Sienna - Ok, I have to admit... I really like giving layers to Sienna.  She is the A-Typical mean girl.  So part of the fun in using her with Jackson is that (as with Rocki) I can see Jackson having a better influence on her were they together.  Now Chapter 4 changed things up as it was originally just a chapter of Jackson thinking about his situation with the 3 girls and comparing them and deciding what to do if Sienna wasn't an issue.

Sienna was going to factor into the story.  Honestly, I had her slated for the Prom chapter (which we haven't gotten to yet).  However, when I decided to add a new subplot I then decided to move Sienna up several chapters.  I also introduced (for the first time) the character of Sienna's older sister Selene Logan.   If I were the casting director for Fuller House I would cast actress Meg Delacy as Sienna's older sister.  For the Logan family tree, cast go here (link). 

Chapter 5: Chelsey - So... This was always going to be Chelsey's chapter but the idea for the beginning was added during the writing for Chapter 3.  

While Jackson has multiple partners (and the girls know this), I thought it would be interesting to make some of the girls in this dance team have a bit of an ulterior motive.  Three girls have a bet to see who can get the farthest (in their comfort zones) before a specified time with Jackson.  I keep the identities hidden (completely) and leave it to you to try and decide who they were. Their identities were revealed in Chapter 8 so if you are reading this and aren't up to date... sorry.  Looking at my cast I selected Tori, Trinity & Chelsey to be my trio of girls.  However, as I was digging through photos of Kelsey Lynn Cook she had the look of someone like Ramona that Jackson could be attracted to (kind, sweet, caring, etc).  So, I swapped Casey in and traded Chelsey out.

I had already written the chapter though so adding in the subplot I had to make some changes.  One thing I did not change though was the fact that Chelsey seemed a bit more assertive/aggressive like she was in a hurry.  That was her characterization for the bet, however... I left it in as a red herring.

Part 2 will be posted after Chapter 10 goes live.

Here are my original chapter outlines to get an idea of what the story originally looked like.

Chapter 1: Testing the Waters - Casey

After the incident in the cafeteria, Jackson suddenly becomes very popular with some of the school's population.

• The first girl to approach Jackson is Casey Richards

• The pair meet at the football field after school.

• Jackson kisses Casey. The kiss turns into a full make-out session.

• Jackson rides the bus with Casey to her house as it is on the way to his home. Sitting in the very back, they snuggle and kiss some more as they are the only ones in that section.

• Casey asks Jackson to keep this between them as she fears Sienna's reaction.

Chapter 2: Dance, Dance Revolution - Trinity

It's Friday evening and Jackson is at Dave & Buster's with some of his friends when he bumps into several of the dancers.

• Trinity pulls Jackson out of D&B's.

• Once alone and away from the group Trinity propositions Jackson.

• Utilizing his skills Jackson starts slow and then moves further than his two previous kisses by placing his hands on Trinity's ass.

• Trinity wants to keep things casual and secret (Just like Casey).

Chapter 3: Friday Night Lights – Corissa/Coco

The Football season is over and Bayview is victorious. Someone is waiting for Jackson after the game.

• Coco is waiting for Jackson after the game.

• The two go to a restaurant on another part of town where they won't be known.

• After dinner, the two go to the beach where they make out.

• During their makeout session,  Jackson asks Coco for permission to touch her and Coco allows Jackson to touch her breasts through her clothes.

Chapter 4: Assessing the Situation - Sienna

It's the weekend and Jackson is home alone assessing the situation he is currently in.

• Set during the events of

• Jackson thinks about the three girls he is spending time with.

• He is not dating any of the girls, they just get together to make out.

• Jackson has groped all three girls (with their permission)

• (Addition) Jackson saves Sienna from Brady.

• (Addition) The two have dinner together.

• (Addition) Jackson and Sienna make out after a heart-to-heart.

• (Addition) Jackson takes Sienna home and meets her sister.

Chapter 5: Chauffeur Duty - Chelsey

Jackson is driving now and has the distinction of driving Ramona and several of her friends home from the Dance Team.

• (Addition) 3 of the girls (Casey*, Trinity, and Tori) make a bet concerning Jackson.

• Jackson picks up Ramona, Casey, and Chelsey from the dance team.

• Drops off Ramona first as she needs to work on a project right away.

• After dropping off Casey Jackson heads to Chelsey's house.

• Chelsey is hungry and offers to buy Jackson dinner, the teens eat at the beachfront. (changed)

• After dinner, the pair talk, and Chelsey entices Jackson.

• Chelsey allows full Jackson access to her breasts.

• * Originally Casey was going to be Chelsey.