Final Commentary (Pt 1)

 Due to feeling under the weather I am breaking up my final review.  I will finish posting it (hopefully) after I get a little rest.

Cruel Summer Timeline

Summer of 1995

Dustin Kimble son of Diane Kimble drowns in Lake Forrest Green due to bad supervision.

Summer of 1996

Five counselors are murdered by Diane Kimble whom she holds responsible for the death of her son. Diane is deemed insane and locked up for the rest of her life in a nearby maximum security psychiatric facility.

May 2021

5/14/2021: DJ and Gia try and force Jackson and Rocki to break up.

5/15/2021: Jackson proposes to Rocki

5/24/2021: Jackson and Rocki leave home and elope.

5/25/2021: Ann Phillips arrives in Forest Green. She is picked up by her sister (unbeknownst to Ann) drugged, hunted down and killed.

5/27/2021: The counselors all arrive at Camp Forest Green.

Manager: Chad Brad Bradley

Assistant Manger: Sienna Logan

Girls Swim Coach: Miranda Costas

Nurse: Tori Fielding

Games Coach: Roxanne “Rocki” Mahan (Fuller)

Cook: Ann Phillips

Lifeguard: Ethan Edwards

Boys Swim Coach: Bobby Popko

Archery Instructor: Jackson Fuller

Popko is killed due to head trauma and then drowns.

5/28/2021: After the swim/beach party the counselors as systematically killed off.

Tori Fielding: Impaled on spikes.

Ethan Edwards: Blown up in generator room

Miranda Costas: Axe to the head

Chad Brad Bradley: Exploding car

Sienna Logan: Shot with three Arrows

5/29/2021: In the early morning hours the Fullers injure then kill Jessica Phillips/Kimble.

5/30/2021: The Fullers inform their parents of what happened at camp and their marital status.

5/31 – 6/4/2021: The Fuller's move to their new home in Arizona.

Jackson & Rocki take an interview on Wake Up San Francisco with Danny & Becky. The interview initially goes well until it is sabotaged by a producer.

2022

The Fuller's write a book about their experiences during the massacre at Camp Forest Green. The book is a nation wide best seller.

The rights to the story are bought by a movie company and turn it into a blockbuster.

The Fullers share their royalties with the families that were denied compensation by the Bradley's.

2025

The Fuller's build a new larger house. They keep their original home and use it as a guest house.

5/24/2025: Rocki Fuller gives birth to twins (Ryan Mathew & Madison Celeste Fuller)

Summer 2025: Ramona Gibbler moves to Arizona to open a dance school. Is named the twins godmother.

2/18/2027: Regan Daniel Fuller is born to Jackson & Rocki.

6/1/2029: Gianna Joesphine Fuller is born to Jackson & Rocki.

2030

Rocki meets with Diane Kimble, Jessica's biological mother and the original Camp Forrest Green killer. Rocki gets an insight into the woman's mind. She admits to killing Jessica which enrages the woman.

Diane Kimble dies later from heart failure. She is cremated.

Rocki writes her second book about the original killings.

5/29/2031: The 10^th anniversary of the murders at Camp Forest Green. Rocki & Jackson host a get together for the families of those that were lost during the rampage.

Commentary:

So this is our final commentary track for this series. Obviously the prequel could not be posted prior to the completion of the story as it immediately gives away the big twist at the end of the story that Jackson and Rocki are actually married. Unlike the main story the prologue and beginning of the epilogue are straight forward and filled with drama to start and end the issues Jackson and Rocki have with their mothers.

Now some might wonder why I didn't write the story with them dating? A consideration but then it would not be realistic for me to thing the readers would have Rocki ever believing that Jackson could be the killer. As his secret wife I could do that while she would never believe in internally but to all of you... she had her doubts.

My red herrings

• I placed Jackson in the area of the killings during the time frame of the death of Mystery Girl (Ann Phillips).

• The killer wore all black (Jackson has a similar outfit).

• The killer (ironically) had the same kind of bow as Jackson.

• The killer was as fast as Jackson was at drawing, loading, and firing an arrow.

• Jackson was missing from the end of Chapter 2 until his reappearance at the end of Chapter 5 (sort of).

I don't know if you've wondered why I seem to pick Phoenix, Arizona as my new go to site for my stories... the main reason is that I have family in that area and have been there several times and like the area. It is close (relatively speaking) to San Francisco where DJ's family lives. So that's why the Fuller's go there (besides the fact that Rocki is going to school there).

Rocki obviously was the primary character of these stories. If you've followed my stories it should have been pretty obvious that Rocki was going to be this stories “Final Girl”. Rocki is strong but when we get to Chapter 4 we see how all of this is starting to weigh on her mind... particularly after Ethan and Miranda die. Miranda's death is particularly traumatizing as Rocki fully sees the death (she could only imagine Ethan's fate). Rocki is pushed physically and emotionally until she is once more reunited with her love. Knowing without a shadow of a doubt that Jackson isn't trying to kill her (as he could have if he were the killer). After surviving her harrowing experience she is emotionally distraught. Her friends have been killed, she has been terrorized, and chased throughout the camp ground, her saving grace was her husband and his plan. After they kill Jessica Rocki is extremely clingy to her husband, something he completely understands given everything she has endured.